So bright.
Sunshine blanket.
Where's the shade?
Chilly air.
Leaves are falling.
Wear a sweater.
Flakes are dropping.
Everything's white.
Cold.
It's raining.
Drops from the sky.
Everything's wet.
Ice cream.
Drips down the cone.
Sticky.
It is cool that you set the scene differently in each stanza. I also like that you tell the story of a certain time period, instead of an exact moment.
ReplyDeleteI love the way you wrote this. It's interesting how you went from season to season and ended with ice cream. Great slice!!
ReplyDeleteFantastic title that sets up your poem. You capture each season so well in just a few words and I love the last stanza!
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